I think that what you posted was very logical. But, what about
this? suppose you added a little information? I am not saying
your content isn't solid, however what if you added something that grabbed folk's attention?
I mean d ]___a_R is a little vanilla. You
might glance at Yahoo's home page and see how
they create post titles to get people interested.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get readers
interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it would
make your website a little livelier.